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| Scared of Being alone. Jillian Bronze Peasant Sins: 27 Xations: 0%  09-01-2003  This is my pic of my body. I was trying to have a look for this but I couldn't get it right and this was the best one of the bunch I think. I wanted teh pic in black & white to bring out the loneliness and coldness but didn't come off too well. Not sure whatelse I can tell you about the pic so everything else you will have to get from your own minds. Photographer: SiN-Xation Date: 4-18-02 Attached Images | |||
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| 09-01-2003 | #2 (permalink) | |
| Paradox Sins: 3,847 Xations: 14%  | I think you look to wet but clean for the scared look, maybe if your hair had been out of plavce and there was more fear in your face... BTW How you doin'  | |
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| 09-01-2003 | #3 (permalink) | |
| SiN-X Admin Sins: 2,320 Xations: 8% | I like it although it reminds me of a Calvin Klien ad mostly. But I do like the wet look and the black & white for this pic. But its looks more like you just lonely I don't see the coldness in the pic. | |
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| 09-01-2003 | #4 (permalink) | |
| Silver Knight Sins: 631 Xations: 0% | Well, this is just my opinion as a photographer, you said you don't like it, and what you were going for, here's what I would have done, had I been the one behind the camera. First, I would have changed the lighting ratio. It looks like it is a 3:1, I would have done about a 9:1. The position of the lights I would have also changed. I would have brought them further back, to create a harsher, or stonger light. You see, the further away a light source is, the "harsher it is. This is why winter light is so peircing, and summer light, though brighter, is softer, b/c the earth is closer to the sun in the summer. I would have raised the main light (the brighter one, the 9 light in the particular ratio that I would have done), and I to add an additional contrast, I would have left the print in the developer (probably the film as well), to give the final a contrastier look. Higher highlights, and blacker shadows. That was my way, my style in my photography classes, I liked my prints contrastier. You will see what I am talking about when I am able to post in this section, and I am not yet. As for changing your hair, Jillian, I don't know how much of the "feel" for the photograph that would change. It would change the "look" definitely, but the changes in lighting, both in the studio, and in the dark room would have the most profound effects on the print. If you would like me to shoot you sometime, let me know, we could redo this, and do it my way. Though I would like to try changing some of the aspects in the model, as well. I would like to shoot w/ your hair up, and down, as Hsoolien suggested, and also try different postions of your shoulders, arms and head, to project more body language. I'll quit babbling on now. | |
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| 09-02-2003 | #6 (permalink) | |
| Paradox Sins: 3,847 Xations: 14% | She's still hot | |
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| 09-19-2003 | #10 (permalink) | |
| Silver Knight Sins: 631 Xations: 0% | Just another suggestion, for lonelines in a picture, I would have my subject not look directly at the camera. It is too personal. Look just a bit to one side or the other. Also, try doing that and looking slightly downward as well. Good luck on your next attempt. If you want me to shoot it, I will. | |
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| 06-19-2004 | #13 (permalink) | |
| Gold Apprentice  Sins: 144 Xations: 0%  | wow I didn realize there were that many Photog's here, i like the pic, the idea is sound just minor deatails to work out, looking at the camera gives the subject a strong and bold defient look to her, it is good, lol i undestand it wasnt what you hoped for but some of the greates masterpieces were just mistakes in of themselves | |
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| 07-21-2004 | #14 (permalink) | |
| SiN's Farscape Sins: 10 Xations: 0% | Quote:
I totally agree ---loneliness does not look out--loneliness is focused within. -reiynscape. | |
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